Farewell


Farewell

 Van_Gogh_-_Starry_Night_-_Google_Art_Project

A twinkling star shone bright for me

One night I asked it why.

Its twinkling light diminished,

And then it vanished in reply.

I pondered long what I had done

To cause the star to go.

I ponder of it still today

Perhaps I’ll never know.

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8 Comments

  1. susieslittlecreations

     /  May 31, 2013

    love this image and the poem which goes along with it, very descriptive and enjoyable to read. xx

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  2. I enjoyed this poem so much! The rhythm and the premise are amazing, such a personal peek into wondering. Good job

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  3. lisabrock

     /  June 1, 2013

    perfect!

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  4. KWP

     /  June 2, 2013

    that’s a great poem !

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  5. kdavisfanclub

     /  June 2, 2013

    Superb poem! Nice rhyme and most engaging, thanks for sharing, kind regards, Baldy 🙂

    Reply
  6. I’m really digging your short poetry.

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